Saturday, July 25, 2009

Shall I compare thee to a winter's day?

With apologies to Mr. William Shakespeare

Shall I compare thee to a winter's day?

Thou art more cold and maketh me desperate

Hailstorms deter not the lone wolf on its way

And winter's lease leaveth no room for hate

Sometimes too deep run the crevices of lust

And oft is its crimson complexion dimm'd

And no fair from fair will ever rust

By chance nor nature's changing course untrimm'd:

But thy eternal winter shall not fade

Nor lose possession of that poison that thou owest

Nor shall Death brag thou wanderest in his shade

For Death himself is but thyself slowest


So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,

So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

In other words, I'm crazy about you when I know I shouldn't be.

30 comments:

Janith said...

:) is it still her?

Paparé Boy said...

Who? o_O

tulie said...

Yes Chavie ol' boy,

WHO? :P

Janith said...

HAHAHAHA :D

this is fun! ;)

Makuluwo said...

Hahaha! Aww how chees- uh I mean adorable. :P

Dee said...

oh my god..SO CUTE! I love it!! :) :) my advice - shave, get a haircut, go give her flowers, call her after a day.

:P

Paparé Boy said...

@Spidey - Crawl off, insect. :p

:D

@Dee - O_O

Wow. Um, thanks! I think. :D

Will give the haircut suggestion a thought. :p

AlterEgo said...

interesting... :) good luck

Paparé Boy said...

Thanks. :)

PseudoRandom said...

beautiful imagery...depicts the emotions really well :) I don't think you need to apologise to Billy at all! :)

Paparé Boy said...

Hey, thanks a lot! :)

Anonymous said...

i love it! being a Shakes fan myself! its awesome

Anonymous said...

Brilliantly done! U'v still got the poet in u, eh?

- m -

Paparé Boy said...

Thanks, guys. :)

Sabby said...

I am with DC on this one - shave and haircut and the rest and voila, the girl's yours...(well, if only things were that simple ne? =)

Paparé Boy said...

-_-

YES, if only.

By the way, this... uh... "poem" is purely fictional. It's not about anyone.

The Puppeteer said...

Oh snap out of it! =P

Paparé Boy said...

Snap out of what exactly? -_-

This is not REAL dammit! It's not based on anyone or any real event. How many times do I have to explain this to people? :/

hijinx said...

Such perversion of Shakespeare's words, shame on u! :P

Paparé Boy said...

Boo hoo! :'(

That's it. No drinks for you on Sunday. :p

hijinxd said...

I don't drink anyway. :P

Paparé Boy said...

I meant fruit juice, fool. :p

alterego said...

hey.. D may or may not have told me something... :P But go see my last post anyway :)

Paparé Boy said...

I have NO idea what you're talking about.

Oh, wait, I think I do. :p

Gutterflower said...

Really like this one.
Very 'awww' inducing.
:P

Paparé Boy said...

"Awww!" :p

Thanks! :D

Manori said...

were emotionally challenged? I like it, the first three sentences.

Paparé Boy said...

Emotionally challenged? WTF? :S

Well... yeah, maybe. :D :p

Thanks. :)

Anonymous said...

AAAahhhhh! One of my favourite Shakes works!!!! Plagarism! LOL! Whatever, all the best luck, if it is needed!

Paparé Boy said...

Muchas gracias. Yes, it IS needed. :D