You slither, you hiss
You embrace, you kiss
I wither, I miss
My disgrace, my bliss
He hallows, she mellows
He bellows, she follows
He wallows, she swallows
How hollow, how shallow
I watch, you mock
The cradle won't rock
They botch, they dock
The ladle won't wok
You slither, and smother
Hither and thither,
I gather their blather
And lather your tether
8 months ago
15 comments:
Catchy.
nice.. really
Interesting...
Poetry I believe is left to the interpretation of the reader just as art to the viewer, but I'd like to know what inspired you to write this.
one word: DINIDU?! :D hahaha
Hehe Interesting indeed!!! ;)
Wow! That was hot. =)
and lather you tether? harrr! short and simple. has many meanings =)
Thanks, guys. :)
@The Puppeteer - Nothing inspired me as such. Just a random thought I had. :)
@Chavie - Eh? :S
Random thoughts? Pfft! Fine, keep it to yourself! =P
lather your tether? why does that make me think horses? :S
Uh... probably because you live near that riding school. :S
Hehe I really enjoyed reading this.
I think what Chavs means is Ding is known to write like this.
But definitely very interesting
"Lather you tether" cracked me up.
Oh. OK. :/
Thanks, man. :)
Woowww! Nice! The wordplay totally ROCKS!!!
Thanks. :)
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