Who goes there?
It is I.
What bringeth you here?
‘Tis of no concern to you, my love
Forgive me, I am but following orders
Follow your heart instead, beloved
I would if I could
I know
You must go back
Ah, but not without what I came for
What do you seek?
What you hide
It is not mine to be given at will
It is now
I cannot let you in
You will
Not now
Now
No
Yes
You shall not pass
I’m already in
Oh
8 months ago
11 comments:
NICE post !!!!
love it
i dont even know why u wrote it and whats it about
but i love it
:D
ummmmm.... :D
@Middle Child: Don't worry, it looks as if he didn't know what he was writing about either.
@PapareBoy: Experimental writing eh? I generally classify dabblings like this as the 'Modern Art' of writing, something which I detest but I can't help liking this for some odd reason :)
It's the kind of thing that will have enthusiasts trying to crack the riddle and the wherefores and whatfores for years :D
If you ever make it as big as Shakespeare, Literature students in posterity will have a ripping time trying to unravel this :/
Emotions stealing over the moated castle that is your iron heart? :P I actually did imagine this in graphic detail :D
Soo... your sure this isn't a convo between SF and MR?
lol, John and Chaar have said everything that had to be said! ;) good one! :D
@MC - Thanks. :)
@Tulie - Wow, okay. You said on Twitter that that was a sincere compliment NOT dripping with sarcasm, so... thanks. :p
@John - Interesting interpretation. :p
@chaarmax - The post had nothing to do with politics, I assure you, but I must say that is another interesting interpretation. :D
@Chavie - Thanks, dude. :)
I automatically related it to sex! Clearly my mind is in the gutter!
wow...
you actually wrote a poem about the first time I sodomized you...
I'm.. touched :P
@Scrumpilicious - Clearly. :p
@St. Fallen - :p
That was pretty hilarious! LOL!
At least my mind is not as bad as Fallen's! :-P
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