Friday, March 6, 2009

See?

I wish you could see what I see in you the way I see it, but I know you won't see it since we don't see what's right in front of us when we're so blinded by the glow of what we want to see and not what we ought to see.

Now do you see what I see?

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How about now?

Now?

Oh well, I tried.

10 comments:

Sabby said...

Oui!

Paparé Boy said...

Really, what do you see, Sabby? ;-)

And I just made a few changes to that. :)

Sabby said...

I liked the other one better!!
It rhymed with my 'oui' =P

Paparé Boy said...

Oops.

But the ending hasn't changed. I just added the last bit as an afterthought. So you're rhyme-y comment still stands. :D

Anonymous said...

Dude.... that's one long sentence... toss in a comma somewhere! =P

Anonymous said...

I see a lot of 'see's and am trying hard see what the hell you want us to see.

Can you give us a clue ;p

Jerry said...

I seee loonnndon, I seee sam's town noww....

Anonymous said...

Ohhhhhhh,

I see trees of green, red roses too, I see them bloom blah blah.. I see what a wonderful world this is

:P

Scrumps said...

I see! I see!

Paparé Boy said...

:D